writing practice

I want to improve my writing

first day of writing

today because its my first session I don't write about some topics and I want to introduce myself. My name is Hossein. 28 years old. And I am from Iran. My major is accounting. I graduated 2 years ago.
English is foreign language for me. My mothers language is Turkish and my second language is Persian.

If by chance you visit my writing and your mothers language is  English so please help me to write correct and good.

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Hossein mohammad poor

My Telegram

https://telegram.me/researches99/joinchat

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My Habbies

After finishing military service in army I tried to find job, but unfortunately nothing I could do. then I began to research and wrote for university students. Because of my family issues I had to abandoned boxing class. These days I just run outside as practice and jump rope. Economics crises and defrauding of governments make many problems to us.            

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I want to write about my place where I live in.

I live in Islamic Republic of Iran. East Azerbaijan is my province and my beautiful city is Tabriz. Tabriz is in the center of province. East Azerbaijan is the northwest of Iran. 600km far away from capital. There are numerous historical places in my city. For example  Tabriz amusement and  Alishah Arg,     

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what did you used to do when you were kid?

Because when I was a kid. I lived in village so I used to take sheep to eat. I use to eat chocolate. we were not reach family and we didn't have  more kind of foods so  I used to drink milk at breakfast.I used to play outside with friends. I was the 11th son and I was short because of that I was so jealous. I remember when I was a kid I rang doors bill and escape.

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importance of family

Family is a small group in the society that contain from a man and a woman. By special costums these man and woman become wife and husband. this is the smallest example of a family but the largest family is unknown. gathering in same place and create a village and a litter bigger than city it will be a city.

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Effect of foods on body

Doctors believe that foods have helpful and somehow harmful  effect on our body. For example,  a study from the Harvard school  shows people who eat lots of white rice face with raise type 2 diabetes. In the other hand, rise composed carbs and fiber that are needed your body.


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Hossein mohammad poor