writing practice

I want to improve my writing

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importance of family

Family is a small group in the society that contain from a man and a woman. By special costums these man and woman become wife and husband. this is the smallest example of a family but the largest family is unknown. gathering in same place and create a village and a litter bigger than city it will be a city.

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Hossein mohammad poor

Effect of foods on body

Doctors believe that foods have helpful and somehow harmful  effect on our body. For example,  a study from the Harvard school  shows people who eat lots of white rice face with raise type 2 diabetes. In the other hand, rise composed carbs and fiber that are needed your body.


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Hossein mohammad poor

first day of writing

today because its my first session I don't write about some topics and I want to introduce myself. My name is Hossein. 28 years old. And I am from Iran. My major is accounting. I graduated 2 years ago.
English is foreign language for me. My mothers language is Turkish and my second language is Persian.

If by chance you visit my writing and your mothers language is  English so please help me to write correct and good.

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Hossein mohammad poor